Film Review

Hello there. I need to get this paper done to pass the writing proficiency for college. Attachment is the paper prompt and a copy of the essay I wrote but needed to be revised or rewritten. I need a strong thesis statement. Make the quotes from the film fit in the paragraphs and not just placed there randomly. I quoted the line from the character using their names in capitalized. Take some of the lines of the quote out if you think it’s unnecessary. Check the correct format of quotations from the film and resources cited. I also need an additional two resources to back up my argument. Please help me find them, write the rest, and add them to the paper to support my opinion. Check for plagiarism. Do not use sources from websites! I think I did use a website as the source. Please make those corrections for me. All the directions are in the attachment. Thank you!